Jihad Amin

Free CV Analysis

Hiba Khan  <hiba@writerinn.com>

To Jihad Amin

September 1, 2020
5/5

Hello Jihad, 

This free resume analysis by Writer Inn is designed to provide an honest assessment and some suggestions to assist you in job search. Considering the fact that we review hundreds of CVs every month, we know just exactly what is pushing your CV game down and happy to provide insight into how you compare to other job seekers competing for the same positions.

Resume Score

Your resume score is based on key criteria that recruiters and hiring managers look for. It indicates how your resume stacks up when compared to top resumes in your industry.

Your resume leveled up 24% out of 100. This suggests there is room for improvement on your resume.

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Visual Representation

Some people say that looks are not important, but that is not the case with CV/Resumes. We have noticed that your design is visually erratic. It is congested in a way that there isn’t enough white space available which makes the employer want to read through. Remember that your resume is your marketing tool. It’s the first impression a potential employer has of you.

 You need to consider the size and type of bullet points. Things like these may look ignorable – but remember, if it isn’t pleasing to the eyes, the employer won’t even take a breath reading it.

Resume Writing

Your professional CV is up-to-date, professionally identifies you and covers the area’s most relevant to your professional level and business goals. It is a plus point because this is an important factor in hiring a manager to keep reading.

While reading your CV, we couldn’t find persuasive words that would add interest to your work. Instead we saw passiveness which made your writing dull and not interesting to read through. The other thing we noticed is that you have completely ignored the use of bullet points and used heavy paragraphs – which isn’t what a recruiter is looking for.

Repetitive Words


Strong, unique action verbs show hiring managers that you have held different roles and skill sets. They also help your accomplishments stand out and make them more impactful. We found that you overused 4 action verbs on your resume. We recommend that you replace them with unique action verbs - this helps make your achievements more impactful. Overused action verbs: Managing (3 times), Work (3 times) and Learn (4 times).

Grammar and Spelling Errors


To ensure your proper place to be getting an interview call, you have to make sure that your Resume/CV holds proper command over grammar. Your CV holds a collapsing hold of grammar which can be dreadful to submit

Resume Style

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Email Address Missing

We couldn’t find your email address. Use a professional email address, like 'first.name@gmail.com'.

If you've included the section(s) and the tool hasn't picked it up, please make sure you've named your section titles correctly. Use conventional section titles like 'Experience', 'Projects' or 'Work'.

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Buzzwords

We found a vague buzzword on your resume (hardworking). Phrases like these are a red flag to employers and should be removed. They add fluff to your resume and are often too vague to communicate any actual value. 

In this section, we scanned your resume for common buzzwords and clichés that are considered to be overused, vague and ineffective. Examples of these words include 'results-driven', 'team player' or 'hardworking'. These words don't convey your impact or achievements, and just take up space on your resume. To recruiters and hiring managers, they are considered to be nothing more than marketing fluff.

Digital Wellness

Resume is saved in PDF format. This keeps employers scanning toa really moderate level, eventually giving some Application Tracking Systems (ATS) issues. To get better digital wellness and easy scan, make sure you upload your file in word to help dissect the true nature of your resume. 

Your Resume Findings

You forgot to include a summary
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Your resume is written in low instances of strong grammar and buildup
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Your CV is a bit too congested and is lacking a flow and bullet points
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Your Next Step and Our Recommendation

Jihad, you don’t really have much of an experience but there is a variety of skills attached to you. For a person who is as starting with a bright mindset as you are, we unfortunately say that your resume undersells you. This is the most important tool in your job search and it needs to clearly communicate everything you have achieved till this day. 

Here are a few recommendations that can help you get the roadblock out of the way:

Action Words

You shouldn't use the same action verb more than two times on your resume. We recommend replacing the duplicate occurences of the overused action verbs.

Visual Impression

Your resume does not make a strong visual impression. Your resume should appear clean, uncluttered, and appealing to the eye. Try to shorten your paragraphs and use bullet points.

Expert writers found at the platform of Writer Inn can make you work out these problems in minutes and land you that job 10 times faster. What are you waiting for? Hire a writer now.